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Mary, a small and eager young child, was reading her fantastic new book. She couldn't wait to read the ultimate ending in which the battle against the pretty princess' and the terrible trolls would occur. As she flipped the yellow rusty colored page, her stomach flipped-flopped and she felt qualms. Her palms were damp with the sweat and as she released the page from her grip, she realized she had crumpled it. But the young and restless girl didn't care. She could feel the tension going through her nerves as Tiana, the water princess, was defeated by hideous troll and his filth. She hopped up and down on her pink carpet and cheered aloud with joy when Rockell, Daisy, and Shaleigh, beat almost half of the troll army. She perused the chapter, thinking about what would happen as a result of the battle. She was sure the princess' would win. After all, they were the pretty and elite ones. But what came as the end shocked her. The hideous, gruesome, nonentity, evil trolls had won! What a terrible fate to the princesses! Mary cried for a long time, so emotional over the twisting conclusion. But she had learned a lesson. The story can't always go as you want it to, and sometimes a twist can help you better understand the author's purpose and theory. And she now knew why the author had made the trolls win.