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     As the young adolescent, Tom, walked through the forest, he noticed many brown and white furry creatures scampering through the trees. His feet crunched the golden and flame colored leaves as he made his way home to the warm smell of fresh, crisp bread and hot chocolate. He stopped to the sound of a footstep. It was as if someone was following him, very closely... He could feel the the hot, smelly breath warming the back of his neck. The horrid stench made Tom's nose twitch, and he didn't like that, for now he had given the "object' a hint that he knew someone was behind him. As quick as a lightning bolt could strike the Earth, Tom whirled around in fear and curiosity, not believing what he saw.